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Rain I by ~grieverwings:icongrieverwings:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Fixed




The sky is murky, damp with tears
The angels shed throughout the years
My heart is heavy, wrought with scent
The rains, to these grey skies, have lent
And yet, my soul is high aloft
Within the rain clouds, dark and soft
The sun
Has run
And left the rain as joy to come
©2009 ~grieverwings
:icongrieverwings:

Author's Comments

? I wonder if I put down the category right...

It was very rainy about... two, three weeks ago, so I wrote a few poems about rain while bored. This is the first one - rain always puts a little bit of a rhythm in my heart. I love the smell most of all, I think.

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~hermionechick8 Jul 4, 2009, 7:23:50 PM
ooh I like. :)

:( I kinda wish it would rain though...All this humitidy without a drop of rain is kind of depressing. :(

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~grieverwings Jul 4, 2009, 7:27:20 PM
I know, me too - I'm not complaining about the pretty dark skies, but I'd like at least a DROP here or there.

:3 Thanks, dear.

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I am Griever in DA's Final Fantasy Crew

"It's like killing two pigs with one stone." -Laguna Loire, FFVIII
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~Muirin007 Jul 11, 2009, 10:43:42 AM
Rain is my favorite. It's so inspiring, isn't it? I often feel like my soul is parched living here, but I suppose that makes the rain even more special when it shows up. :)

This poem is one of my favorites of yours. It just makes me feel good. I love "damp with tears" and "my soul is high aloft."

You rock, kiddo. :lol:

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"We learn from experience that men never learn anything from experience."
~George Bernard Shaw

"I don't have much call for handkerchiefs, my dear...there are certain advantages, you see, in being without a nose."
~Erik
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~grieverwings Jul 11, 2009, 3:36:06 PM
I love the rain a lot - rain and cloudy skies are my favorite. :) I need to live somewhere it's warm almost all the time and and rainy a lot but not humid. D8 And a biggish city.

Aww, thanks, friend! :D I don't usually do rhyming (hurr hurr), so it's good to know it wasn't atrocious. :) :heart:

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I am Griever in DA's Final Fantasy Crew

"It's like killing two pigs with one stone." -Laguna Loire, FFVIII
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~Fluffball264 Jul 12, 2009, 7:56:08 AM
I love the summer storms during the day or late evening. You get the scent of everything that's green (which is a great deal when living near the New Forest) while the skies are dark and the land still appears to have a strange luminescence as if the sun still shines and that releasing of tension that plagued you all day as the storm gathers.


You're writing is so evocative, bringing such bright clear images and memories to mind. ^^

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I'm not quiet, just antisocial........
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~grieverwings Jul 14, 2009, 5:59:52 PM
:D Thanks, hon! I love the rain, too. It's only a shame that we don't get more of it... :P

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I am Griever in DA's Final Fantasy Crew

"It's like killing two pigs with one stone." -Laguna Loire, FFVIII
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